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Monday 4 July 2016

GHOSTBUSTERS

Once upon a time there was a house that was haunted by a family who died in a earthquake. A family was staying for the weekend. When they got there there was a butler that was for the other family that died. He gave the family the creeps. When the family was looking around the house they saw a photo of the whole family when they finished looking at it the last child wanted to see when he looked there was nothing there and he walked away sacred. When they were sleeping the little boy heard something downstairs. When he heard that he called THE GHOSTBUSTERS!. When he called them they came and they saw the ghost and said this will be a piece of cake and in one flick of his vaccum he SUCKED the ghost right in the vacuum and the little boy said let’s sing the GHOSTBUSTERS and they lived happily ever after.
GHOSTBUSTERS

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  2. Ni hao Lata,
    my name is Cia. I am a Summer Learning Journey blogger who will be working with Ako Hiko bloggers at May Road School over the summer holidays.

    I did not expect a happy ending to your creepy short story at all, what a twist. I think it was cool that you included the Ghostbusters in your story, and lucky you did, they got the job done pretty quick! You should definitely write more short stories to share on your blog.

    I noticed you have registered for the Summer Learning Journey but haven’t posted anything just yet, here’s how you can get started:

    Copy and paste the URL below into the address bar of your browser, then click the on the ‘Week One; In The Beginning (1800 - 1870) link:
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Remember, in order to earn full points and a chance to win prizes for the activities you finish, make sure you think carefully about your responses and answer ALL the questions. See you soon!

    Toe feiloa’i fo’i (‘See you again’ in Samoan),

    Cia.

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